Blue Haze

WOW! What enormous insight! You have really captured the emotion in this piece. Very powerful stuff. Outstanding!

I know that my opinion is going to conflict with some others, however you state that your rewrite hasn't got the feel or the mood that you wanted. Trust your ...

Hi Dammerung Thanks for your post. I did have trouble coming up with a title for this. My plan was to eventually have a whole lot of different stories about ...

Wow! I take my hat off to you. Not only have you helped me heaps but more importantly you have done it in a gentle and kind manner. THANK YOU! ...

Thank you kindly for your comments Jess. I look forward to your critique as it has been a little while now since I was last at school, and one does ...

"and I am wont to agree" I dont understand this bit. In fact I dont really understand any of it although it appears to be well written. I will have ...

Thanks heaps to everyone for you critique. Sorry jennafina and snoink but I had to listen to the majority and see if I could improve on this a bit. I ...

This is my first ever critique so please forgive any ignorance or error on my part. I really enjoyed this poem, it is incredibly descriptive and you captured the meaning ...

Wow, thanks for your post jennafina! This poem is about the solitude and emptiness that I am feeling in my life right now. I am really pleased that you liked ...